Layout Critique

[Signed Out]

Looking for some critique on this layout. Logo is set in stone, mainly looking for opinions/suggestions on the stripe. Customer wants some type of stripe or swoosh in there.

 

[SignManiac]

Not feeling it and can't really offer a suggestion at the moment but I know that isn't it. I'd try some other ideas.

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

looks good, follows truck flow .... 1st thing seen is the logo cuts in stripe, not sure if that is good in this case.

 

[Gino]

To me, all your emphasis is on the stripe. If that's what you want, you nailed it.

Otherwise, re-think your plan of attack. What do you want people to see, kinda first ?? The name, perhaps ??
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Besides, that stripe cuts the truck in half diagonally and front to back... all at the same time.

 

[Signed Out]

Here is another version I am working on. Less emphasis on the stripe.

 

[Gino]

Nope.

Now, you've made it 'Bottom Heavy'. One's eyes just go to the main focal point...... at the bottom.

 

[Marlene]

#5 is better. maybe make the blue swirl a little lighter blue and the stripe a darker blue so it is there but not popping more than the logo

 

[artbot]

i like the second one quite a bit artistically. maybe lighten the "networks"? otherwise it's clean and very professional/big business looking.

 

[Jillbeans]

Does the stripe have to be orange?
Could it be blue like in the logo?
Love....Jill

 

[Signed Out]

I'll try changing the color of the stripe tomorrow and posy. I think that might work better. Thanks for the suggestions.

 

[John Butto]

That is a nice pic of the tugboat sitting out of the water.

 

[Baz]

With the second layout. Try changing the white in the gradient to black.

 

[Snydo]

With the second layout. Try changing the white in the gradient to black.

The orange eats the logo for me, but I like the overall look.

 

[CreatedDesigns]

I would like to see it with no stripe at all.

 

[Locals Find!]

I actually like your first version. My eye was drawn from the logo right into the website. I don't have any degrees in this stuff or as many years of experience as the others. However, I do know what occurred when I looked at the mockup.

So, if the point is to get the name out there and get people visiting the website I would say #1 will do the job nicely.

If the point is just too look artistic and never make a dime well, you always have the other suggestions.

 

[bob]

Boring. Not worth a second look or remembering the first look.

Perhaps you might try losing the orange and using some sort of electric blue[ish] immediate background that somehow instantly signifies 'network'. Or something. Anything but the yawn inducers you currently offer.