Simple Water Sports Supply Logo

[Joe Diaz]

It is supposed to read: "scuba joe". What do you all think?

 

[zmatalucci]

While it's not the most constructive criticism, if you didn't tell me about the joe part - I would have never noticed it. kind of like the arrow in fedex.

 

[Dave Drane]

Joe, I think you have too look to hard at it to see the "Joe". When you know what it is you can easily spot it but I think anyone else would have to study it for too long. Nice logo though.

 

[Letterbox Mike]

I agree. Nice logo, but too hard to see the "joe".

 

[jiarby]

shouldnt the snorkel be in his mouth instead of off to the left? How's he gonna breathe?

 

[gnatt66]

love the layout, but yeah, what they said. i didnt get 'joe' until i read the post.

 

[Shovelhead]

"joe" doesnt read unless it's filled in.

 

[ProWraps]

simply change the color of the "joe" and it will pop. otherwise is too hidden.

 

[Stevo]

Great concept!! But have to agree with above. "Joe" doesn't stand out and tie in with Scuba. Pro Wraps may be on to sumthin.

Stevo

 

[jscarl]

Same. Fill in the Joe.

 

[iSign]

I agree that it's subtle, & should be less so...

but for the record, I didn't read the post, & it took me about 3 seconds... saw the e, then the o... then the J

 

[zmatalucci]

isign's dyslexic!!!!!! j/k

 

[weaselboogie]

I like. You might be able to resolve this with different line thickness.

 

[Joe Diaz]

Thanks folks. Yeah, that was what I was worried about. I figured rather than trying to make the "joe" in the image work as text, I would just focus on making it easier to read, and look at the imagery as a separate element.

shouldnt the snorkel be in his mouth instead of off to the left? How's he gonna breathe?

:Big Laugh But then it wouldn't say "joe"

 

[Gino]

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I can't get the word 'scuba' to flow with the hairline, but you get the idea.

 

[encadtech]

I like the logo - If you center stroke and adjust the eyes - the Joe it may read better.

 

[Dan Antonelli]

Thanks folks. Yeah, that was what I was worried about. I figured rather than trying to make the "joe" in the image work as text, I would just focus on making it easier to read, and look at the imagery as a separate element.

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:Big Laugh But then it wouldn't say "joe"

Now its awesome. Homerun. I love the main copy type - what is it?

 

[Joe Diaz]

Now its awesome. Homerun. I love the main copy type - what is it?

It's a font called "london" if I remember right. I did some minor adjustments to it.

 

[Tiki]

I was going to say a solid mask your last one you posted looks better separated
Maybe a few bubbles above the (J)

 

[Joe Diaz]

I love that last one tiki!