Business Card Design Critique

[fisheye48]

like your idea...need to change the colors...the lettering on the bottom is to small to read...i like jills idea to put it on the back so you have alot more room

 

[Jillbeans]

Can't enlarge it (is it a CMYK attachment?)
Not keen on the stripes, it does look like it's in jail.
But moving the "the" helped.

 

[signmeup]

How about something really simple and legible?

 

[SignManiac]

Very nice Signmeup. Less is so much more.

 

[HeavyHitter]

I am not feeling the garage door you are trying to use. I would suggest trying to find a different door to use. I have a coupe garage door pics someone. I will see if I can find them.

Dan

 

[SignManiac]

Here's another idea.

 

[signmeup]

Here's another idea.

Cool....but I'd make it fit on the door. Love the font. A&S cricket?

 

[SignManiac]

I think that is the font yes. I tried fitting it to the door at first and it looks small and through off the balance and negative space. I've since bumped it up a touch instead of the overlap on the side door.

This could go in a lot of directions, many color possibilities as well. It's not even my style but this is the image that came immediately to my mind.

Design is all so personal and different from person to person I guess.

 

[SignManiac]

Ok, here it is with the name in the door? You were right about the font, it's cricket. I don't always use fonts by name but rather how they feel.

 

[GP]

What if you dropped the drop-shaddow and adjusted the transparency so it looks like it is actually on the door.

I like the idea and if you go with it, I would get a higher quality picture.

GP

 

[signmeup]

You were right...it's a little small on the door. Maybe a double door. I see we're now tweaking a design suggestion..... funny stuff.
I wonder what the OP thinks of all this.