business card re-design

[SignManiac]

Hell of an improvement over your first design...

 

[Marlene]

i kinda left the dash out on purpose,

never a good idea to do something that looks like a mistake when you are selling yourself as a pro as there will be no one standing there telling a customer that leaving it out was on purpose for whatever strange reason you have.

 

[signswi]

Grommets need to be worked on a lot they look like they're just floating in space (use proper lighting theory and burn/dodge to create the effect) and your informational text font is no good. You're using two display faces, not a great idea. Lose the pillow emboss on the Z swoosh thing and consider killing the drop shadows, at least those on the informational text for sure. The stitch lines could also use a bit of work to look more like stitches.