Critique my beer logo.

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Posted at the same time Maniac. Looks good.

This label is just me messing around BTW. No particular reason for the project. I'm thinking I might switch Berwick and Brewing. Not tonight though.....I'm beat.

 

[Rustyrussell]

I agree it looks just like every other beer label...and that is good...No?

 

[GB2]

These days with all those goofy looking micro brewery lablels, this one doesn't look like every other beer label but instead looks like a classic beer label...and that is good!

 

[Jon Aston]

Looks awesome.

"Brewing" on the ribbon and "Co." sort of abandoned underneath looks weird. I was going to suggest putting both on the ribbon, in one line, same height and weight... but (thinking like someone who might be looking for a new beer to try) I think the ribbon should actually be used to identify the beer as "ALE", "LAGER", "STOUT", or whatever. You can put the full company name elsewhere on the label, or elsewhere on the bottle.

 

[Jillbeans]

It looks like it's trying real hard to be a beer logo but fighting with itself.
Berwick reads weird to me.
I think the shape needs to be broader horizontally, and BERWICK BREWING all together.
Then drop the ribbon down so it's not covering the beer mug, and put the tagline in the ribbon.
I do really love the colors.
Just my 2¢
Love....Jill

 

[signmeup]

Nice avatar Jill! And thanks for the 2 cents. I'm back to being too busy to mess with this again but I think you're right on the money with those suggestions. I'll get back to it in a little while.

 

[Perks]

What would happen if you arched the Brewing banner on the lower half, revealing the glass of beer ...Nothing comes before my beeer!

 

[JR's]

I'm thirsty now.

Nice avatar Jill, reminds me of late spring. ( Cool with a little bit of Heat.) ;-}


JR

 

[GoodPeopleFlags]

Looks awesome.

"Brewing" on the ribbon and "Co." sort of abandoned underneath looks weird. I was going to suggest putting both on the ribbon, in one line, same height and weight... but (thinking like someone who might be looking for a new beer to try) I think the ribbon should actually be used to identify the beer as "ALE", "LAGER", "STOUT", or whatever. You can put the full company name elsewhere on the label, or elsewhere on the bottle.

EXACTLY what I was going to say. When I'm looking for beer, I want to know if it's an Ale, Lager, Stout, etc. "Brewing" shouldn't be the main thing.

 

[artbot]

definitely "brewing" can't be in the middle banner. and the wheat thingys are covered up.
berwick in the middle or top. brewing co. on the bottom. pride of the valley, i'd lose that all together. or smash it really small with dates and other little decorative lettered arcs.

 

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OK....I took a couple of minutes. It's now a bitter.

 

[GoodPeopleFlags]

What kind of bitter? Ordinary, Special or Extra Special? (Just showing off my beer knowledge!)