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Williams Signs

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Let me have it.
 

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wolverine34

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i'm new to the sign making but i would have to agree. at first it doesn't look like a landscaping buisness. but who am i to judge.
 

megacab

New Member
i like the middle one of the three but agree with the others. seems like a tough tie to a landscaping company as laid out now.
 

megacab

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i just quickly put it into corel and added green leaves and left it rough. just wanted to see if that changed anything......still needs something.....
 

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CentralSigns

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Are you trying to say American company or landscaping company. If it's the second then you need to have that easily recognizable. Redesign a landscape
 

Custom_Grafx

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Look like a political party that supports a landscapers' union.

Your priority of message is 80-90% - america, 10-20% - landscaping (maybe less).

I think it's coz of the colours and font. The colours say America obviously, and the font is very diplomatic - therefore it looks very bureaucratic as a whole.

If you're allowed to use the statue of liberty in your artwork, maybe use that, standing on a hill or something and integrate that into the name and make the message 1) landscape/garden 2) (statue of) liberty.

My opinion, the statue will help people associate/memorise the logo with the name, and the context of the image of landscape should then tie it up if done well.

Very clean and nice work though.
 

Jillbeans

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Nothing about it says landscaping.
I think of a bank or something like that.
I'd ease up on the patriotic.
Are the red white and blue set in stone?
What about black lettering and a "statue of liberty" style hand holding a plant?
In an engraving style like that on money.
Love.....Jill
 

Craig Sjoquist

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I like the the one on bottom, although the top 2 are readable the LL looks like IL main reason I don't like them,
Bottom looks nice and clean but would change the color to green(s) landscape being the darkest on white.
 
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