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First wrap!
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401Graphics
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Thats not comic sans under the mower is it?
I think the text seems too small above the number.
Other than that, looks pretty good. IMO
I think the text seems too small above the number.
Other than that, looks pretty good. IMO
Sign Up Graphics
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Sign Up Graphics
Not bed for the first wrap. the text above the phone# is a little boring.
Great job!!!
Not bed for the first wrap. the text above the phone# is a little boring.
Great job!!!
Pat Whatley
New Member
Is the lawnmower in a pond or is it a hovercraft?
Craig Sjoquist
New Member
If I COMPARE to what most in this city I live in do for wraps ..... this is better then 90 % of what sign shops here produce for wraps.
Jillbeans
New Member
The small front portions look OK. Pretty nice, really.
The rest, from the design side, is atrocious.
(this may not be your fault but still)
• phone number has more emphasis than name...and you stamped on it.
• I see SERVICE use three times in the laundry list!
• Can barely read the line under the hovering lawn guy and it's the most important part (I think)
• Did you use two scripts in the same layout (it's hard to tell)
• Line under the number is smashed and looks like an afterthought
• info behind the tires does not pass the squint test
• Why the huge spaces between the laundry list?
Next time ask us about the layout as well as the sticking part.
A nice bulleted list of services (with SERVICE only once) would have looked much nicer.
Try not to run everything to the edges.
The lines running through the design make your eye read it like it was panelled, but there is no flow or style. Did they have to be on there?
If you have the ability to print I'm assuming that you could have made the illustration MUCH nicer with the use of gradients and shading.
I'm sure you won't like my comments but I couldn't just sit here and not say them.
Love....Jill
The rest, from the design side, is atrocious.
(this may not be your fault but still)
• phone number has more emphasis than name...and you stamped on it.
• I see SERVICE use three times in the laundry list!
• Can barely read the line under the hovering lawn guy and it's the most important part (I think)
• Did you use two scripts in the same layout (it's hard to tell)
• Line under the number is smashed and looks like an afterthought
• info behind the tires does not pass the squint test
• Why the huge spaces between the laundry list?
Next time ask us about the layout as well as the sticking part.
A nice bulleted list of services (with SERVICE only once) would have looked much nicer.
Try not to run everything to the edges.
The lines running through the design make your eye read it like it was panelled, but there is no flow or style. Did they have to be on there?
If you have the ability to print I'm assuming that you could have made the illustration MUCH nicer with the use of gradients and shading.
I'm sure you won't like my comments but I couldn't just sit here and not say them.
Love....Jill
briankb
Premium Subscriber
What she said.
I think the spacing of the bullet list is because someone hit the distribute button.
divers2deep
New Member
All of the feedback is greatly appreciated and will be in my thought process during my next project! Thanks....
divers2deep
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TammieH
New Member
Just an observation...It took me a sec to figure out that the customer did sales and service, ...not a lawn mowing company.
The most important thing a sign does in as little words as possible is to tell the perspective customer what you are selling. Everything else is just bells, whistles and eye candy...I love the graphic on the trailer though.
The most important thing a sign does in as little words as possible is to tell the perspective customer what you are selling. Everything else is just bells, whistles and eye candy...I love the graphic on the trailer though.
HillHouseGraphics
New Member
Nice Job
Looks good I wish that the first wrap that I did myself was such a smooth surface.... If I recall, I had 800 rivets and a rivet brush. The next time I bought a rollepro.
Looks good I wish that the first wrap that I did myself was such a smooth surface.... If I recall, I had 800 rivets and a rivet brush. The next time I bought a rollepro.
