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fish restaurant layout

Discussion in 'Designs & Layouts' started by luggnut, Nov 17, 2010.

  1. luggnut

    luggnut Very Active Member

    i'm working on a restaurant sign ... would love some critiques and/or suggestions.
     

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  2. Brandon708

    Brandon708 Very Active Member

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    It looks great and wouldn't change a thing. Good job!
     
  3. Gino

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    Very nice. I'd consider changing the white outline around your secondary copy. It's almost lost and being white, makes it seem as if it should be reconsidered.
     
  4. J Hill Designs

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    +1 :thumb:
     
  5. k.a.s.

    k.a.s. Very Active Member

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    That looks really nice, I like to see it with the "Rays" going beyond the oval a bit. Just to see what it looks like, but overall very nice.

    Kevin
     
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    I like the oval, Ray's and the lure very much. The banner looks out of place to me. I find it a bit too rustic for the other elements..... it's a different style. It's a bit small too..... makes it hard to see just what "Ray's" is. (check out the thumbnail)
     
  7. Joe Diaz

    Joe Diaz Very Active Member

    I agree 100%. The banner doesn't quite go.
     
  8. Rick

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    +1
     
  9. luggnut

    luggnut Very Active Member

    i tried it larger but it seemed too cluttered to me... after looking though the white Gino mentioned seems out of place a little.

    and the "fish camp and grill" could be centered better.
     
  10. luggnut

    luggnut Very Active Member

    that is a great suggestions.. thanks!! i just used a clipart banner i had that was shaped how i wanted. i will probably create a custom banner if the customer agrees that this is close to what they were wanting.
     
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    I really like the "Ray's". I agree that the style of the banner doesn't match the rest of the design. Also, the text in the banner is not centered. Overall very nice.
     
  12. signmeup

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    Something like this would read better. (Needs a better font....something condensed)
     

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  13. Brandon708

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    I dont like the bottom of the R being blocked.
     
  14. Gino

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    I like what you originally had, but I just changed up the color a little and tried to give your sandblasted look inside.
    rays fish.jpg
     
  15. GP

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    I would like to see the banner lower, allowing Ray's to be centered in the oval.
     
  16. BlueFishDesigns

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    My eye seems to be drawn to the negative space between the "R"s legs. Can you make the banner take up a *little* more of that space?
     
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