How's this Look

[langecustomgraphics]

This is for a snowplay area at a ski area that offers tubing( basically a tractor innertube with a pvc skin around so you go faster). I am still working on converting the drawing of the tuber, but I think since it will be used as more of a logo, it might be to much. how do you think this looks on its own?

 

[dman0427]

Looks great!

What font is That?

 

[langecustomgraphics]

Thanks. A&S Happy Jack.

 

[signmeup]

The gray outline might look better as a blue outline. Keep the same contrast.....just in blue.
Or maybe no outine.

 

[Jillbeans]

Thicken up the black outline just a tad, and thin down/lighten up the grey one.
Love....Jill

 

[langecustomgraphics]

cool thanks. here are the changes.

 

[Gino]

What Jill said and now lighten the top one of the three.

 

[all_things_art]

i like the top one of the three too ....what happen if you lighten up the grey outline,take the thin white outline change it to black (to make the black stronger like jill said and that would help strengthen up the centers of the A's)then redo the thin white back on the inside of the black ,just a tought

 

[encadtech]

IMO - I like the last one - It stands alone by itself w/o the extra stroke

 

[Marlene]

the top one looks good to me. I would suggest changing the shadow on the snow line from a drop to a shade shadow so you don't get those two little pointy things on either end.

 

[signmeup]

Bottom one post #6

 

[jscarl]

Ditto, Bottom of post 6.

 

[J Hill Designs]

yeah I thought bottom one off the bat as well