Laundry List Wording?

[Jillbeans]

This is straight from the customer's email reply when I asked for which services he'd like to be listed on the back of his bizcard:

Landscape Design and Imaging
Tree and Shrub Installation
Wall and Patio Installation
Lawn Renovation and Installation
Lawn and Landscape Maintenance
Commercial Snow Removal

That's a lotta Installations and Lawns!
Any better wording suggestions?

Love....Jill

 

[marcsitkin]

Landscape Design and Imaging
Tree and Shrub Installation
Wall and Patio Installation
Lawn Renovation and Installation
Lawn and Landscape Maintenance
Commercial Snow Removal

Landscape Design
Lawn, Shrub and Tree Planting
Wall and Patio Construction
Lawn and Landscape Renovation and Maintenance
Commercial Snow Removal

 

[Gino]

Tell him it's his truck. It's not a business card or brochure, its a truck. For the most part, things can only be seen at a glance. The common time period is about 2 to 3 seconds. For the most part, people don't list more than 3 items or 5 easy items. If he wants that much copy [and you're right..... better worded], it will have to be in a small panel or something where only people walking by can read it.

Possibly this if he insists...... ​

 

["Deposit Please"]

Complete Landscape Service & Snow Removal
design . installation . maintenance
Residential & commercial
Now you have some room for images like brick patio or retaining wall w/ a beautifully landscaped scene to grab their attention.

 

[J Hill Designs]

its a biz card, gino...

 

[Gino]

its a biz card, gino...

Guess it's time to get new glasses.... :Oops: that's right, I don't wear real glasses.... just the K-Mart Specials. Gonna half to kick it up a notch.... BAM !!

Sorry Jill....... save my response for when the guy wants that on the side of his truck.
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[Jillbeans]

I'm doing his truck too but he wants that really simple.
I told him to save all the info for his bizcard.
Thanks so much, this is one of those deer in the headlights days today.

I really appreciate your help.

 

[Sign_Boy]

You can reword it using some of the suggested ideas or sell him on a fold over card.

Landscape Design and Imaging
Landscape Architecture
Tree and Shrub Installation
Arborist or Tree & Shrub Specialist
Wall and Patio Installation
Stone Work
Lawn Renovation and Installation
Same as Landscape Architecture
Lawn and Landscape Maintenance
Keep this one
Commercial Snow Removal
Keep this one