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Little help please

Discussion in 'Designs & Layouts' started by parkedcar, Oct 18, 2010.

  1. parkedcar

    parkedcar Member

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    I have a wrap to do for a customer that I created a logo for.
    I really want this wrap to be perfect. I have plans on using this wrap in my new brochures, and web site, since I want to showcase the whole package (logo, cards, signs, vehicles, shirts, etc) I'm pretty happy with where i am with it, but seeing as i work alone, its just me that see's it and my fiance. She likes it, but says something is throwing her off. So i'm looking to get some opinions from the pros here.
    I also included a pic of the cards, since i want the truck to have the same feel. Any help is much appreciated!
    Thanks!
    Screen shot 2010-10-18 at 3.19.29 PM.jpg

    Screen shot 2010-10-16 at 1.48.43 PM.jpg

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  2. hardrockwraps

    hardrockwraps New Member

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    what template system are you using in the second picture? it looks awesome!
     
  3. Gino

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    I like it. What she might be referring to is that the name area seems a little too small or overpowered by that huge leaf. That leaf becomes a focal point and I don't think it's intended to do so.
     
  4. SignManiac

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    The name and landscape management stacked on three lines seems to bother me. I think two at most might be better if you're still at liberty to make any changes.
     
  5. speedmedia

    speedmedia Very Active Member

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    Overall I really like the look and feel of it. Looks very corporate and franchise like, but in a good way!

    Thanks,
    Kurt
     
  6. parkedcar

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    Thanks guys!
    I just use PVO for the template, and the 2nd photo was inspired by Dan Antonelli. I just found a pic of a white truck and brought the design over in photoshop.

    I think you are right Gino. I'll play around with it.

    And sign maniac, the logo is done. Cards were printed months ago as were all his signs. But thanks for the input!
     
  7. njsigns

    njsigns Very Active Member

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    I agree the large leaf toward the rear is throwing off the design for me, otherwise it looks great!

    Gene
     
  8. Sticky Signs

    Sticky Signs Very Active Member

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    I like it but I wonder what it would look like if you used a different color for the top portion of the truck.
     
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