Log o design critique

[bob]

...Thanks Bob! I am sticking with Sarah here, not only because I just bought her and was excited to use her, but because I think she's beautiful and works wonderfully in this layout.

However I think you are 100% correct on the other font and how about instead of moving the graphic into the main body, I bring the secondary copy out underneath it, to support it. It did look to be just floating there...

I made the comment about Sarah Script merely to show that in spite of my prejudices, I think this is a good use of it. I own it as well and, from time to time, have been known to use it.

Much better with the secondary copy under everything.

 

[Joe Diaz]

Looks great. Although IF I were to change anything I might play with those buildings some more. Think stylized, but not cartoony.

 

[signgal]

B-u-t-ful!

 

[k6media]

Very nice... Is this a custom font?

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

I like the design and layout and use of fonts and also graphic .... great ...but

Signmeup said 1st the stuff behind the building needs to be soften to bring out the buildings it was the 1st thing i saw on thumbnail which is ok if Athens was stronger they are competing with each other as is .. but that's me and my 2 cents

 

[Marco]

It is a good one. I agree with Joe Diaz.

 

[JR's]

Very nice... Is this a custom font?

http://www.letterheadfonts.com/fonts/styles/script.php

http://www.letterheadfonts.com/fonts/sarahscript.shtml

Sarah Script

JR

 

[johnnysigns]

Have you tried Trajan for the Biz Ad copy line?

 

[Dan Antonelli]

That's how you do it.... homerun ---

Like Joe said, maybe stylize the buildings, maybe not - could be fine as is---

nice job, clever integration of the graphic, and makes for a cohesive brand--