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[laserman70]

Thanks for the help everybody...:U Rock:
After reading all I made some adjustments.
Liked the layout of sevens (Thanks) and ideas from others.
Took away all the PS stuff as was suggested.
Went with different font.
Changed font colors.
So, what do you think?

 

[SignManiac]

Kerning needs some work.

 

[J Hill Designs]

and whats up (down) with those 'e's?

 

[SignManiac]

That would work better without the peach and a bigger pill.

Adrian, what's a pill?

 

[speedmedia]

Thanks for the help everybody...:U Rock:
After reading all I made some adjustments.
Liked the layout of sevens (Thanks) and ideas from others.
Took away all the PS stuff as was suggested.
Went with different font.
Changed font colors.
So, what do you think?

Your getting close but still do not like your font choices... Do yourself a favor and go to this site and test some different font choices. The script and secondary fonts need to be changed to something else.

http://www.letterheadfonts.com/typetester/index2.php

FYI - I like Flash for the script but play around a bit... They have tons of nice stuff on that site.

Thanks,
Kurt

 

[SignManiac]

One more simplified.

 

[Colin]

After reading all I made some adjustments.
Went with different font.
Changed font colors.
So, what do you think?

The font for the title is terrible. The font for the tag line has no harmony with the title, and doesn't work for a cleaning company. Keep going.

 

[J Hill Designs]

Adrian, what's a pill?

pill shaped thingy with cleaning in it...

 

[laserman70]

I agree about the E's..
I have changed it to Alpine Script.

 

[speedmedia]

You are getting there. Dump that font for "cleaning" and look thru the letterhead site for another one that will complement "Peachtree. A little adjusting on that and I think you have something to work with...

Thanks,
Kurt

 

[prototype66]

I agree about the E's..
I have changed it to Alpine Script.

Try cleaning in Avant Garde

 

[laserman70]

Try cleaning in Avant Garde

I like that look.
So many fonts, so little time.. lol
Thanks

 

[SignManiac]

essendine is a beautiful font choice cleaning

 

[prototype66]

There ya go, no just a little centering . I like it! Lots of super talented people here ! I try to pay very close attention and learn as much as possible!

 

[prototype66]

essendine is a beautiful font choice cleaning

 

[fmg]

I like that look.
So many fonts, so little time.. lol
Thanks

Looks perfect!
You get so much for free from many people here.
I would charge at least a six pack of beer for that!

 

[laserman70]

Thank you everyone for your help.
So many great people here, with so much talent and a great eye.
:U Rock::U Rock:

 

[Service Sign Co]

I love Alpine script, But honestly, I think it is too heavy in this case
A lighter one may be better.

 

[Marco]

Awesome turn out #32, you guys rock. Well I didn't get to use my shiny brushes here. ;-))

 

[signmeup]

Century Gothic would work too.