First the crit: What I see is a layout, that braille spread out is
not visually pleasing, and no one cares about knowing the letter
for letter translation. I like circles, but this is just filling space.
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Every time I see someone saying they have "X" amount of
education or experience, I question how good that education
was. I question mine a lot.
Was it "design" education, or software education?
Like Gino mentions, your effort does not match 6 years of
education. Question it.
Some of the mockery you are getting on this thread is from
someone who's education should be questioned as well, and
worthy of mockery too. So don't take offense, many of us doing
this for years think we were great... we can all learn from others.
There are a few comments that are spot on. I agree, the old
one is better. I can't see anything on yours worth retaining.
I think you should start over.
If you want to be a designer, immerse yourself in good design...
you don't know good design? you can learn that too.
Look at the process of design, a good video is this one.
[video=vimeo;113751583]https://vimeo.com/113751583[/video]
I use that process all the time, I looked at your effort and I see no
process, no concept. I took the video's idea of process and thought about
the concept of elevator and braille. This is what I came up with...
The box is an elevator, the braille on the panel is what your specialization
is. I saw no need to jack up the type, I assume you deal with contractors,
sign shops and maybe architects so I thought it best to appeal to them.
