Need advice/comments on van wrap...

[divers2deep]

Working on this design for a client.

Let me know what you guys think!...

 

[threeputt]

Not bad. Plenty readable. Color are good for a "cleaning" business.

No photos, that's a good thing.

 

[Christian @ 2CT Media]

watch for Distortions due to the deep window channels on the NV and the Sprinters.... Some times spanning text across those channels makes the letters look funny.

Also looks like the top of your S in BPS is going to roll on to the roof line.

 

[divers2deep]

watch for Distortions due to the deep window channels on the NV and the Sprinters.... Some times spanning text across those channels makes the letters look funny.

Also looks like the top of your S in BPS is going to roll on to the roof line.

Do you think it will distort that big off a logo ?

 

[Gino]

I like it, too. Good colors usage, but it seems odd to have bubbly water being yellow.

Some of the word placements are also in kinda out of the way spots.

 

[CP Signs]

I like it. Not sure about the the white between the letters in the logo. Might look nice if it shows the background color. Also, I know most businesses like to add everything they do but. I've never been a fan of bullets. Most times less is more. Drive people to call or the website and then they can find out everything one does.

 

[phototec]

I like it. Not sure about the the white between the letters in the logo. Might look nice if it shows the background color. Also, I know most businesses like to add everything they do but. I've never been a fan of bullets. Most times less is more. Drive people to call or the website and then they can find out everything one does.

Yep, to much white SPACE in the logo, I would change that so the background image fill those large spaces.

Not a fan of the yellow, however over all looks good.

 

[fmg]

It will do the job and get noticed in the crowd.

 

[Kentucky Wraps]

Phone number lacks contrast BIG TIME.

 

[Jillbeans]

I think the laundry list seems redundant, as it states almost exactly the same as what is mentioned in the tagline.
If you must use it, I would make it left justified and in caps and lower case, because the all-caps reads like a block of text. Spacing between the lines needs tightened up too.
I would make the phone number in the same blues as the logo so it stands out more.
Love....jill

 

[Dennis422]

Yup, phone number might need to stand out a bit more.
Not a fan of Helvetica for the type. Why not to play with the fonts a bit?

 

[Caitlin]

I think it looks great and will definitely catch attention. I would just agree with a couple things mentioned above, maybe the list doesn't need to be there, and try to make the phone number stand out a bit more. I personally like the yellow!

 

[DrCAS]

Watch putting a wrap around the backside like that. Keep the color solid when wrapping around. Makes for much easier installs.

 

[visual800]

The logo is stiff the fonts used are not a good choice. I do not like it and I think there could be much improvment. Subcopy would look better italicized or in script. Seems like its all over the place. Sorry thats my opinion. It does not appeal to me.

 

[rjssigns]

Don't care for the "laundry list" on the door. Phone number is difficult to make out. The rest is great. I would make the phone number the same font/colors as the BPS and move it onto the door. Put a website beneath ph. # also.