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It's better to have two hands than one glove.
Ah, an acceptable use of Mistral. Barely.
I might try an antique quill script like Algonquin or some such. There's a bunch of them from which to choose.
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Ah, an acceptable use of Mistral. Barely.
I might try an antique quill script like Algonquin or some such. There's a bunch of them from which to choose.
fmg
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Yep and it doesn't seem to be going in the right direction either.
grafixemporium
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Devo, the second logo in post #12 is my favorite so far. Think about adding a very simple artistic graphic of a house... something overly simple and a little abstract. Your graphic elements in each logo in your original post are just far too complex for a "logo".
For what it's worth, all of your attempts are far better than the other posters' suggested drafts. You're on the right track!
For what it's worth, all of your attempts are far better than the other posters' suggested drafts. You're on the right track!
Williams Signs
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HulkSmash
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No. Not at all. No.
Marco
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Maybe op will think of something, this just a start... but, okie dokie. OP, delete that thought.
fmg
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Are you serious with this?
Dave Drane
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SignManiac
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Don't take it personal Marco, at least you made an honest effort. I admire that even if the design isn't the best attempt. Keep on pushing yourself, it's the only way you will get better.
Dave Drane
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grafixemporium
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All of the OP's original logo mockups are 10,000x better than any of the other suggestions... and 1,000,000x better than Marco's suggestions 
HulkSmash
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You kidding me? His original logo wasnt bad at all. i understand if you want to better your design skills, and i respect that, but.......
skyhigh
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now why are you guys busting on someone that is "attempting" to help, yet not posting up something yourself???
Show us what ya got there fellas.
Devo, I like the dude with the big hammer (I think thats your best so far)....if you lose the effects on the red lettering. Otherwise, I like Williams layout in post 27
Show us what ya got there fellas.
Devo, I like the dude with the big hammer (I think thats your best so far)....if you lose the effects on the red lettering. Otherwise, I like Williams layout in post 27
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Marco
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OP is mia, however, I find lots of fun when I doodle-up a logo or design. Shout out to thread by Gary, I'll try pencil and paper sketches.
I just returned to Signs101, and I see number of logo and design post are abandoned within a short time. As most of you pros out there may know, there's lots of unfinished business here, better said 'room for improvement'.
On another note; I wished OPs were more considerate and stated "project abandoned" or had power to "close-out" threads.
I just returned to Signs101, and I see number of logo and design post are abandoned within a short time. As most of you pros out there may know, there's lots of unfinished business here, better said 'room for improvement'.
On another note; I wished OPs were more considerate and stated "project abandoned" or had power to "close-out" threads.
HulkSmash
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True,
but unless i have time to provide something that is actually viable, i wouldnt waste the OP's time with a trash design.
HulkSmash
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You're hilarious.
When it comes to design there's a handful of people I would even consider listening to on this forum, if i ever needed a design critiqued. It's easy to spot who's good, at it, and who's not.
I respect when someone designs something for someone else as a suggestion, but if it's bad the OP has to let known that this is not the direction he wants to take... don't take it the wrong way.