New idea on business cards

[klingsdesigns]

Looking for some feedback on a new design and layout for our business cards. These are roughs.

 

[SameDay Signs]

I like them but I think the side with all your info on it where the light green line on the bottom is it becomes hard to read the info on it. Just my opinion but like the layout

 

[Gino]

I think, rather than, we design it, perhaps....we make it, or make it happen.
Also, I think it could e about 20% or 25%bigger.

The other side is gonna be a little hard to read for anyone much over 40. Remember, its a business card, not a brochure.

I do like the colors, just not the way they are put together at the moment.

 

[mpn]

Try black type in the green bar. Overall I like it.

 

[klingsdesigns]

updated

 

[vid]

Like it... just an observation, though. The background on the Kling's Design logo side pulls my eye off the lower right corner. I would try it with the background flipped to the other side. ... but that's just me. Oooooh, and I like it with the black type in the green band.

 

[klingsdesigns]

updated

 

[John in Cali]

Are textured finishes available for business cards? That might be interesting.

 

[Rick]

Print it out full size...
to me the type is small, the pattern is small

 

[reQ]

Had "carbon fiber" on my cards also... not using it anymore, looks to cheap in my opinion

 

[visual800]

Depth Sir! and as far as the "Fighting Sperm" in the back ground make it so they are there but very dismal. They take away from the design when they are the same color. I placed a lighter color border on them so as you would still see them but not really, if you follow me

I dont care for Serpentine but this is what you chose and its not that bad. I dig the metal background. I think you have something to start with. please see attached

 

[Jillbeans]

The back seems OK enough, I would change the font color in the green band to black because there is not enough contrast.

On the front of the card, I would suggest a different font. If you have that one everything forever, and are married to it, I understand. But Serpentine screams 1990s to me. I'd like to see something bolder and sans-serif.

The lettering is lost, contrast-wise. I would make the name in white with a black outline, then bring in the green swooshy stuff. I feel that you are focusing too much on the cool background pattern and not enough on the message.
Love....Jill

 

[thinksigns]

I think the comma in your tagline should be a period.