New VS Old..

[Warlick Designs]

Just looking for a little feedback and some constructive criticism

I put a pic of the old logo up so you can see what they had vs what I did..

 

[heyskull]

Which one is which?
Design on the right is more ledgible from a distance perspective.

SC

 

[GAC05]

Which one is which?
Design on the right is more ledgible from a distance perspective.

SC

there is a clue in the image title for the one on the right......
I think you are right about the readability between the two.
Too many things going on in both.

wayne k
guam usa

 

[S'N'S]

Everything is shoved over to the left, so looks a bit heavy that side. Move Jon Elrod and details to the right side to balance the bottom a bit.
Or maybe move the truck down and put all the details on the right side.

 

[OldPaint]

the one on the right SUCKS........no thought went into that one..........whoever did that has ZERO DESIGN SKILLS.

 

[player]

the one on the right SUCKS........no thought went into that one..........whoever did that has ZERO DESIGN SKILLS.

I think they did have marketing skills. The logo pictorial tells exactly what they do from a glance.

 

[heyskull]

there is a clue in the image title for the one on the right......
I think you are right about the readability between the two.
Too many things going on in both.

wayne k
guam usa

Yes I read that correctly Wayne but it still confused me which one was the new design!
Or maybe it was a trick question to see if we are awake.

I guess the main issue is with the client as they can get stuck on a design or colours and no matter what you do they will not change.
My input on this one is start again with a clean sheet with the wording it has to have in it and try something new.

SC

 

[Gino]

On the right, looks like a business card, not a logo.
On the left, looks like a hard mess to read, also not a logo.

 

[HDvinyl]

I would drop the number, enlarge the icon, and switch the colors around.

I would make the letters on the boxes orange too, and reduce the & symbol.

 

[OldPaint]

I think they did have marketing skills. The logo pictorial tells exactly what they do from a glance.

i bet he does.......(for all the good it will do him)
BUT THAT DESIGN SUCKS..... no design SKILLS......PERIOD)))))))))

 

[HulkSmash]

i bet he does.......(for all the good it will do him)
BUT THAT DESIGN SUCKS..... no design SKILLS......PERIOD)))))))))

Yeah OP. because Your business card design, is one of the best I've ever seen.

 

[Warlick Designs]

sorry guys I should have explained more. The one on the left is new. The actual logo does not have the phone number it simply says 'tramco moving & delivery' I was at home and only had that file on this computer.. the one on the left was what they had designed by someone else for a business card. I came across that and said 'wow that sucks' but dealing with this client proved to be a little tough.. the blade runner type font was not something he was willing to live without.

 

[OldPaint]

Yeah OP. because Your business card design, is one of the best I've ever seen.

and iam sure............your gona buy something from me.........NEVER)))))))) HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

 

[rjssigns]

I'd lose the hand cart and boxes. Would help clean it up. Nike, Reebok, Harley-Davidson etc... don't use any pictograms.