not enough?

[Signed Out]

Re-facing a sign face on a backlit which doesn't work, this is temporary ( 6 months tops) then the sign will get fixed and new face with logo and name.
Customer wants it on the cheap for now so I will not send it to designer rather lay it out myself and just wanted opinons.

 

[oldgoatroper]

Instead of making "The" smaller using the same font, why not do it in a slanted signpainter-type script?

 

[Pat Whatley]

I like the font on the bottom one but there's an awful lot of wasted space on all of those. I'm all for more white space in a design but that's a bit much.

 

[BobM]

All need work but the top one reads better to me.

 

[Bigdawg]

my lines are a little too thick, but you get the point. try something that fills a little better and puts the emphasis off the word "the"

 

[Marlene]

I'd re-work the top one. attached is a quick re-do using all the elements you have but placed differently.

the biggest problem is 6 months is a long time and the sign still has to look good as the public has no idea that it is a temp sign.

 

[Gino]

Along the same lines as Bigdawg, but without the heavy rules.

 

[Rick]

Why not have a lil fun with it?

 

[slappy]

blue showed up kinda purple, but i tried

 

[JTBoh]

blue showed up kinda purple, but i tried

backlit RTA...