Potential or Trainwreck?

[Circleville Signs]

Love the idea of the pine tree being the leg of the "P".

Hate Old Glory as the main font. (And I love Old Glory - but as an accent, not as the main font).

 

[J Hill Designs]

My word I beat this thing to death in sketches, and this is what I landed on liking the most.

not too shabby...I would try to extend the tree a bit more...on the verge of not looking like a P

 

[HaroldDesign]

Thanks guys. I suppose a different font would fine, but I think this works well. I've found it also is pretty easy to encase this in various shapes. However, I want the shirt prints to be loose letters so I'm trying to keep it simple and able to stand on it's own.

 

[HaroldDesign]

Old Old Thread...

Quite an old thread, but I wanted to show what I like to think is progress. Thoughts?

 

[Tiki]

Give the tree the same slant as the (P)

 

[HaroldDesign]

AHHH!!!
Thank you very much!

 

[ProWraps]

Give the tree the same slant as the (P)

this dude schools...

i hope you own a sick hot rod shop or something of the like. everything you grace us with is beautifully executed and on point. kudos bro.

 

[visual800]

this font has got to go! this still to me does not match what you do sir, i say this with respect

 

[neato]

That's turned into a fine looking logo! I like it.

 

[2B]

Give the tree the same slant as the (P)

:U Rock:

 

[Jillbeans]

I also like how Tiki incorporated the "i" in Pine...that thing bugged me from the start.

 

[JTBoh]

tiki's version looks too much like "fine point" to me though.... saw that like 3x looking at it.

I kind of like the different slant - adds a warm feeling to the image - but would be enhanced by bending the "t" inwards a little bit. would frame it out

 

[steeltech]

Good Elements, but not cohesive. Do you have variants of this concept or just this one?

 

[HaroldDesign]

I'm a long way off from "bringing it all together", but here is what I'm doing with it. I have other designs (all wildlife types) that I don't have on the site yet. It's been live maybe a week, and I'm still developing what standards I want to use before going further with things...
http://www.pinepointdesign.com

 

[jkdbjj]

Just don't get why both "p's" aren't the same.

 

[HaroldDesign]

"Pine" has a pine in it. "Point" with a pine in it would certainly make sense also, but it seemed redundant to me. You do raise a good point, though!

 

[qmr55]

Yeah make both the "P"s the same, looks odd with them different

 

[qmr55]

Drop the bottom of the first p down and then make the bottom of the "t" in point loop down further and center design between there. Looks out of place how it is. but getting there!

 

[HaroldDesign]

I've incorporated some suggestions, and I think it has become more interesting...

 

[ForgeInc]

I don't like both P's being the same at all. Also, I think the font you chose for "design" is way too mechanical and stiff looking to marry up well with the letters above. Try something more simple, perhaps extended? Would also suggest making your line embellishments tie in more with the flourishes of the letters. Your lines are stiff, straight, and geometric, everything else is loose.

Getting better though, way to stick with it!