What am I supposed to do with this? Part 2

[Marlene]

put a little cross on the side as suggested so it looks more like an rescue unit and show it to the customer. the message is more positve than that nasty thing he had designed. yours shows action to solve a problem which is much better than showing something sick and near death (that also looks more like a lawn mower). the graphic is so much better, the messge is postive instead of a negative image so go for it ans save this poor guy from his horrid design!

 

[Gino]

Looks great and much-much better.

How 'bout adding a tail to make instant recognition ??

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[Rick]

George Trosley. ( www.georgetrosley.com )

Yes, Computer Commuter is the company name and has been for 15 years. Yes, it does resemble a toaster at the moment, you do understand the concept of "sketch" don't you? It also resembles a big toe with a split toenail.

There is that guy.. but I was thinking Don Edwards...

http://www.amazon.com/Cartooning-Don-Edwards/dp/0963733605

 

[Marco]

I like it Pat, add some shiny stuff to it. Chrome the wheels, or are those hubcaps? Lol, nice work!

 

[Gino]

I just wanted to say 'POLO'.

 

[Marco]

Lol, no no no not here Gino, do that on my threads. ;-))

 

[OldPaint]

lose the light on the top, make the mouse a little longer, sorta like a rail job drag racer, put 4 pipes comin out the side behind the front wheels........look at my avitar of ed roths wild child or here:
http://www.ratfink.com/

 

[dj_elite]

Looks great and much-much better.

How 'bout adding a tail to make instant recognition ??

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The mouse cord comes out of the front not the rear!

 

[Gino]

The mouse cord comes out of the front not the rear!

No kidding ?? I was just taking poetic license.

 

[prototype66]

I love it! but....what...no side pipes? lol
great concept dude!