Ursta i am a big fan of your design work and love this design as posted as a design. but the illuminated version is difficult to read not sure if it is just the photos or if it is actuality. i can think of a few things that would make it easier to read when illuminated heavier fonts (word pizza) and more space between the letters or rearranging the artwork so that the lettering was the substrate and the field of the sign was sheeted out so that the strength of illumination was from the message of the sign and not the body of the substrate.