Business Card Bashing!

[p3]

Well, here's an Idea i've been working on for business cards and wanted to receive a little bashing and see what you guys think!

Thanks!!

 

[javila]

Kill the "owner" title. Remove the cell number.

Is your email e.brandon@p3promotion.com or brandon@p3promotion.com ?


Do you need your webiste listed three times(four if you count the email)?

 

[p3]

its brandon@p3promotion.com.... I can see how that would get confusing.

 

[D&Tgraphics]

Kill the "owner" title. Remove the cell number.

Is your email e.brandon@p3promotion.com or brandon@p3promotion.com ?


Do you need your webiste listed three times(four if you count the email)?

x2

 

[signmeup]

Good start Javila. I don't care for the funny text. Like the icon and colours.

 

[DOGraphics]

I don't like the "weathered". "old" effect on the font.

 

[HaroldDesign]

The top one really grabs me, but it the graphic doesn't seem to coincide with the "we see things a little differently".
Nothing wrong with the bottom one, but I think it doesn't say much for the creative abilities that you have.

 

[signmeup]

What are the three p's? Maybe you should write them out on the card.

 

[p3]

lol I don't really want to do the 3 p's. It stands for promotional product peddler. Which is what my parents started, and I was trying to make it simpler. The top is the front of the card, and the bottom is the back. I also changed the direction of the diagonal stripe on the front so it kinda goes with the text, looks more pleasing to the eye. I wasn't really sure what to throw in the stripe as of right now, so i just left the website in as kind of a filler, may just take it out completely or if I can think of something else to throw in there....

 

[HotWraps]

Dump that grunge font, it doesn't work with the rest of the design.

 

[laserman70]

I like the top one, but the text has to go on the bottom. The grunge is not clear enough.

 

[dortonracing]

i like the top one but when i saw it, i wasn't sure what you did?

 

[mikey-Oh]

i think it's supposed to be one design, the two sides of the card. i'm not much for grunge type and the blue for the text on the bottom (side two) looks like a different blue

 

[p3]

yea, it is one business card, front and back.

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

Like the design/ layout colors grunge look letters,... why cause it does look modern and fitting to maybe your clients

understood 2 sided card
what I don't like ... the word owner... cell number .. email address all 3 not needed
what works even if home based... your address, experience, yrs in area, trust wording

 

[mikey-Oh]

why cause it does look modern and fitting to maybe your clients

craig, i've just seen it everywhere. "modern" as it may look, it's been a trend for the last seven(+) years and it's lost the original aesthetic. what happened to the days of truly violating a traditional font with exactos and photocopying the distress?

 

[anotherdog]

have the back for eroded fancy "display stuff" the front should be for simple easy to read contact details and a logo. 1 phone, 1 fax, 1 email and 1 web address. possibly a cell if you really don't want a life on weekends and nights.

 

[p3]

Front:


Back:


I'm tryin to find a different font that I would like instead of the grunged out impact.

But made a few changes...

 

[mikey-Oh]

actually, the grunge isn't bad. it's nice you applied it through a texture, instead of some free grunge font. i like the way you handled phone and email

 

[grafixemporium]

Great job with the revisions. I would definitely put your website back in that bar across the front of the card. In our business, a memorable website address is everything. Other than that, ready to print!