I give it a 'B' for bad.
Really, there's not much going for in any respect, other than you like it. Made up words, not making sense, ugly type face, hard on the eyes and some more things too cruel and snarky to get into on an open forum where we preach happiness and good thought be with you, until you disagree with an old codger.
I'd try a few more ideas after you get some sleep.