First of all..... who ever heard of an Italian named Miller ??
The decorative font for the name clashes too much with your tagline font choice. I'd rather see the gimmicky hat at the beginning of the name, rather than messing up the middle of reading. It's too distracting in the middle. Using the black outline/shadow makes it much harder to read at a glance. See how Jill's is much easier to read ??
Is this for a menu, electric sign, truck, regular signs...... ??