Although the two styles go well together, I think it's a little too 'Wimpy' now.
Needs a little strength on the bottom. With or without those dots, it's a little top heavy.
just an observation.... here's another... try inserting a little more room after the comma. I know its a style, but it looks a little too close.
I agree about the comma. (on the second one)
Hey Shovel,
One thing I would suggest is to rotate the Motivation script a tic or two up on the right side. Most Script tends to look like it running down hill even though the text baseline is level.
Mike, that is a good tip.
I usually do the same thing.
Shovel, is a "hunge" $100? I'd say that's about right if you only have to walk across the street.
(I only speak Pittsburghese)
Love....Jill