design thoughts?

[laserman70]

Please take a look and let me know you thoughts..
Thanks :U Rock:

 

[weaselboogie]

Looks like you're trying too hard to copy a certain movie logo.

 

[Gino]

Very 50-ish

 

[rushworks graphics]

Looks like you're trying too hard to copy a certain movie logo.

exactly what i thought straight away to!

 

[Colin]

Should it not work as a thumbnail?

 

[Billct2]

Don't know the movie.
Like the shape, but not the font, too hard to read and not strong enough for "Security"

 

[Marlene]

looks like something I've seen before

 

[HulkSmash]

you should start over.. too close..a rip off of the original ..even the same font =\

 

[john1]

Yep! i thought of the movie Cars the first time i seen it lol

 

[slappy]

thought that wasn't coming out till June

 

[slappy]

how about something like the "lock" on the keyfob?

 

[Billct2]

Yea, does look a bit too much like that.
...but what's so original about the "Cars" logo, bet I could find a lot of similar stuff including the old car badges they ripped off.
Still I think a different font would make it work better and be more original.

 

[Jillbeans]

Trying too hard, and hard to read.
I like Steph's take on it.
Love....Jill