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Does this make sense????

Discussion in 'Designs & Layouts' started by slappy, Dec 1, 2009.

  1. slappy

    slappy Very Active Member

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    Please, please, pretty please... any feedback would help. Does this make sense. Would this get you in my door??? Any suggestions would be great. I gotta send this to the paper today. And then design another for another paper, but smaller.
     
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    I dont understand. Is the girl Tonneau? Or is she going to give me a free tonneau? Either way, I'll take it!

    In other words, I have no idea what a Tonneau is.
     
  3. Marlene

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    I think you need to say "win a free Tonnea" or "enter to win..." as when I read it, I thought you were giving them away, the I saw the fine print.
     
  4. Rollie

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    Made sense to me.
     
  5. slappy

    slappy Very Active Member

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    better?? should i put something like IS GIVING ONE LUCKY WINNER.....
     
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    I still have no idea what a Tonneau is. Is it the truck?

    Maybe I am stupid, actually I think that is a well demonstrated fact, but lots of us are morons. If I don't know what a Tonneau is, I figure some other people don't know either. Is there anyway that you can explain, even in the small print, what the heck is being given away?
     
  7. slappy

    slappy Very Active Member

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    Maybe a bolder one liner of " Every purchase over $5 receives 5 entry tickets towards Tonneau cover raffle " I'm assuming it's a raffle? Put the rest of the fine print below.
     
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    Folks who own a truck will understand just fine!, I see nothing wrong with it, it's a legible coupon with a hot girl:thumb:
     
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    Oh. I don't own a pickup, never had, so maybe that explains my ignorance.
     
  11. slappy

    slappy Very Active Member

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    weasleboogie... better?? copy and pasted it in:thumb:
     
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  12. slappy

    slappy Very Active Member

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    that's why i got "can't guarantee application for winning vehicle":doh: someone with a car might enter to win just to win. :smile:
     
  13. Mosh

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    Looks better now.
     
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    CES020 Very Active Member

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    I think it looks nice, but I have no clue what kind of store it's being given away at. Is it a truck store? A printing company? A sign shop? If I don't know what they sell, I'm probably not going.
     
  15. slappy

    slappy Very Active Member

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    we have/own a truck accessory shop. It's our primary business. I have a sign shop inside of it.
     
  16. Marlene

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    much better.
     
  17. weaselboogie

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    :thumb:
     
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    Last rev looks great to me. I think I even know where your shop is at, I got a friend who lives on Edgewood Drive, close to the Sheetz and the 'Jughandle'. There is another establishment up the road that I've been to a few times as well. hahahaha
     
  19. slappy

    slappy Very Active Member

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    yep... you know where i'm at! i'm in between the two! stop by some time!
     
  20. oakcitysigns

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    one thing i noticed. "Winner picked December 21th..." should be 21st.
     
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