Its good, but the colors are kind of lifelessI love the top copy and shading aint crazy about that raggedy script, I like more free flowing BUT that is my opinion
thanks for all the advice... ya the more i looked at it the more i hated the 1st graphics. a couple more with some simple changes
Okay, so after a couple of Presidente' margaritas at Chili's for lunch, here's a few suggestions. Break away from one idea. Try a few different concepts in black and white, then when you hit on something that feels right, screw around with a few basic color combinations. Avoid the special effects buttons if you can and only as a sparing touch, not every damn thing in the design.