Honda Element Wrap finally finished

[SSG_SIGNS]

Just finished this friday, it took a trip to talledaga to be shown off. It took me a while to finish, a lot of details to cover. Enjoy

 

[Vinylman]

CONGRATULATIONS!

The problem I see is that there is to much competition in the background graphic with the main message.

It is a major problem when creating any sign layout. What is the MAIN COPY?, secondary copy, and the background.

I like the concept, however there is no clearly defined separation with the message and the back ground.

For your first attempt I would give you a "B+/A-" on execution, and a "C-/D+" on the composition.

 

[weaselboogie]

Egads man. Too much clutter.

 

[Marlene]

that's a lot of stuff! the list on the back window with the flag checks in the background is nearly impossible to read. the straight lettering against the waved background is too much of a conflict. the jungle idea and the racing flag idea don't seem to go together very nicely. is that a dog in the back window? what's he doing there in the jungle/race track?

 

[SSG_SIGNS]

Any of you that know me on hear know that first of all this is not my first time and second my designs are very to the edge sometimes. This particular design was meant to be seen up close. He goes to a lot of events where he advertises and this will be seen up close. The logo is big enough for people see when he's driving so they know who he is and for the design its self, you would have to live hear to understand it, too much to explain, but trust me everyone around here knows what it all means. To see this one in person and just walk around it, it is very much eye candy to the extreme.

 

[theBLVD]

image GEDC0362.jpg is about 5 feet away from the vehicle. You still need to be closer than that to read the Bullet points?

 

[Mason]

Egads man. Too much clutter.

ditto