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KARATE REDONE !!!what u think

Discussion in 'Logo Design' started by signwizz, Apr 9, 2011.

  1. signwizz

    signwizz Active Member

    redid this let me know what u think again lol
     

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  2. JR's

    JR's Very Active Member

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    now that one I like.

    JR
     
  3. Jillbeans

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    Better but the name is really hard to read.
     
  4. bob

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    Nah...not better. Different and equally bad.

    The silhouette figures are just floating there looking exactly like the clip art they are. Perhaps you might have them interacting somehow. The karate guy could be ripping the heart out of a tap dancer who's trying to fend him off with a banjo. Maybe go back to the ying-yang or whatever they call it. Whatever you do, make them larger, even more stylized, and more together. This is a logo, meant to be seen and recognized at a glance, not a detailed picture story that you have to consciously look at for recognition.

    The 'Triple Arts' is somewhat less than an optimum choice of type face. Although the small caps work as well as the bend. Nonetheless, as Jill observed, it's hard to read.
     
  5. Dave Drane

    Dave Drane Very Active Member

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    I agree. It does not go anywhere near passing the squint test.
     
  6. bayshorecreations

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    I can learn how to do karate while playing guitar hero and dancing all in one place? COOL...
     
  7. Techman

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    Akkkkkkkk!
    It looks like its for
    Karate dance music. What the heck is karate music for dancing?
     
  8. S'N'S

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    What about a oval shape instead of a circle, won't have so much negative space above the name.
    Just a thought, don't really know as I suck at design.
     

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  9. Craig Sjoquist

    Craig Sjoquist Major Contributor

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    Likes the oval shape but like the looks of the first one colors, now punch out the name farther past the oval, with the other colors, maybe.
     
  10. HulkSmash

    HulkSmash Major Contributor

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    not this...
     

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