Logo Critique

[Atomic DNA]

BB

Looks very similar to a mushroom head lol. hmmm

mushroomheadbeanie.com

 

[artbot]

way way way too illustrative. the design looks mean but the name is "cute". at least start by cutting it down to some fundamentals. logos are not for showing off graphic skills. that is the worst thing you can do to a logo. it's my opinion that this logo, even if accepted by the client will kill sales. i did my best to break up what you have but it needs to be about 3x's simpler still.

 

[John Butto]

Looks very similar to a mushroom head lol. hmmm

mushroomheadbeanie.com

I was trying for the phallus symbol, www.phallushead.com
but I guess you saw a mushroom head, hmmm.

 

[Jillbeans]

Please lose the serpentine!
Steeltech's font choice for Beanie is way badder.

 

[Border]

I changed the "Bad" lettering up to a modified Mirage. Resized the eyeballs, moved one over the "i". I like the direction it's going, just need to find a font replacement for the modified serpentine.

I'm thinking I may add texture and tears to the serpentine font.

First thing I thought of now is Mars Attacks~

...sorry, nice drawing and everything.

 

[laserman70]

Not crazy about the font so much

 

[Atomic DNA]

Laserman, I like how the 3/4 view looks. Actually never occurred to me.

Jill, I wanted a toned down word for "beanie". I like Steeltech's for sure. I was wanting a block style look for some reason (got it stuck in my head). I don't know. I'll play around with all of the concepts mentioned here. I appreciate all the help.