logo Thoughts

[laserman70]

Designing a logo for this company. Their cards are a broom and a mop with their name. They would like something with a softer touch.

 

[artbot]

i'd make the tree all encompassing from left to right. and just drop the peach. there's no way to get a peach and a tree in that logo without it looking forced. don't italicize... no bevel, no shadow, etc.

 

[Jim Doggett]

I'd lose the tree. The peachy object is clean and catchy-looking. Too literal is always a bit amateur-looking, IMO. (Apple Computer notwithstanding :^)

 

[laserman70]

I'd lose the tree. The peachy object is clean and catchy-looking. Too literal is always a bit amateur-looking, IMO. (Apple Computer notwithstanding :^)

Better without the tree? I like the peach, it is not over powering..

 

[Tiki]

Fix the kerning P e

 

[laserman70]

Fix the kerning P e

This look better?

 

[ndemond]

Like it without the tree, is the C a little large or my eyes old and tired.

Nancy

 

[Seven Sin Design]

Here are some suggestions, take them for what they are worth:

- Try some different fonts. I think you can find a better one than this.
- Not sure about the brown, maybe try using the green from the leaf.
- For some reason I am wanting to see "Cleaning" below the rest - Feels kind of long right now (maybe in a different font than Peachtree as well).

 

[Colin]

If it's a logo, stick to ONE graphic element (as you've now done).

The "C" is too big. It's ok to make a first letter larger, you'll just need to put an inline on it to lighten it up so that it matches the rest of the word.

Lose the shadow. It's a logo, not a sign.

Ya, different font.

 

[Tiki]

Try reversing the peach maybe a little bolder font

 

[Seven Sin Design]

Here's another idea for you.

 

[RadicalDesignHutch]

Seven Sin what font is Peachtree?

 

[Seven Sin Design]

Amorinda

 

[RadicalDesignHutch]

Thanks....could see a use for that one.

 

[Jillbeans]

First off Seven Sin is one of my new fave designers.
Secondly, I am glad you lost the tree.
Like the idea of flipping the peach.
Would definitely change the font and also not use brown.
Dirt is brown.
You want something clean looking.
Love.....Jill

 

[Fitch]

Style wise - post #6 has it.

Now play with fonts.

just make sure the kerning is right..... or Jilly will rouse on you

 

[prototype66]

Yea fix the c and maybe drop cleaning down below a bit smaller and start it just under the peach. just my 2 cents.

 

[SignManiac]

I'll toss one in the ring. Still doesn't feel quite right to me. I think it's the peach that isn't quite right but for ten minutes work, it's a start.

 

[HulkSmash]

how about losing the emboss?
don't make logos in Photoshop please..

 

[signmeup]

I'll toss one in the ring. Still doesn't feel quite right to me. I think it's the peach that isn't quite right but for ten minutes work, it's a start.

That would work better without the peach and a bigger pill.