New Bar logo

[forty9]

Hey all,

This is for a new Bar/Tavern in a nearby town called the "Flying Monkey Saloon." (Corny name, I know)

They wanted a happy monkey character hanging off of ape-hanger handlebars.
It is a biker themed bar, so they wanted to use Harley-Davidson colors (black & orange).

Any critique/comments/advice you can provide will be appreciated.

Fire Away!!!

 

[SignManiac]

I like the name! I have a flying monkey already...Mine flies and hugs at the same time.

 

[John Butto]

rough with harley orange and black shape logo and a biker monkey, not one that is on my granddaughter's backpack.

 

[Gino]

Well, I think there is way too much orange in there, but then that would be the case whatever color was in that panel area. Lose the outline.
With the handles like that at the ears area, he looks a little more like a bat than a monkey at a glance.
Last, is his smile supposed to be representing the Harley logo ??

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

To much orange around monkey
more depth to monkey or add front fork & wheel

good start

 

[visual800]

I would add a thin white outline around lettering and then a darker orange drop shadown behind letters and kill some of the orange

 

[Locals Find!]

rough with harley orange and black shape logo and a biker monkey, not one that is on my granddaughter's backpack.

I like where John is going with his concept.

 

[Suz]

I like the font you picked. I agree with above, too much orange and needs some white around the lettering. Your logo is cute, but busy. John, I like the way you organized the elements in the design, it's a bit easier on the eye... not so much jumping around.

 

[Marlene]

agree with the white around the letters.e you going to make the sign? this would look really great as dimensional sign