Here is where I'm at with it now...
I don't think I've ever designed with tight kerning, and went a bit nuts at the opportunity. I tend to become blind at various stages of the design process. Usually when I make a substantial change and don't walk away from it for a while.Not liking the closed up kerning in DELIVERY. Don't see a reason to close it up that much'
Simplify it more maybe use just the logo design on the side