When we are doing wraps, we stand across the room, look at the wall and then look at the monitor for 3 secs. If you did not get everything you should of from that amount of time, redesign it.
My opinion, way to much going on unless your trying to attract street racers. They don't pay the bills around here, business's do.
KISS like said above.
Our first wraps for our vehicles were radical. We have learned so much from this forum and the great people here. We have simplified things to be more attractive to business's.. We have gotten many compliments on how much nicer our vehicles look. You can make it a bit edgy, but make it legible and attractive to all types.
Hope that helps