I can't enlarge it but from what I can see, it has a script on a curve, which I have been told is not the right thing to do.
And when using a prismatic lettering, always consider your light source.
Yours appears to be coming from underneath the lettering, which to me is a bit odd.
I would switch out the colors and make the dark one lighter or the light one darker, more subtle.
I think you put the yellow outline onto the prismatic to make it pop but the entire logo lacks contrast to me.
Putting the lettering on the oval is OK but it may have been better if all the lettering fit inside the oval. (like for embroidery purposes etc)
And I usually don't put the phone number in the logo.
Hey you asked.
Welcome to 101 and my comments are meant to be helpful not hurtful.
Love.....Jill
PS
This next comment is not directed at you but merely an observation.
I was out in traffic the other day and noticed a new 4'x8' sign. You could not read the logo at all. It was a bunch of various green things on a light yellow background. Really weak roman style lettering on the name, about 1.5" high. The service (Landscaping) was about 2" high, same weak thin font. Lettering color was baby poop brown.
But the phone number, honest to God, was the entire length of the bottom of the sign and at least a foot high, really squished, in black.