Sandwich board layout

[Jackflush]

This is suppose to get them in the door. Look cheap! Does it say come on in we suck? lol

 

[petepaz]

looks alright, not too much you can do there except hire a gecko...haha

it sends the message, can't ask for much more than that

 

[Jackflush]

Thanks

 

[Dave Drane]

I hope you are using more negative space than what you show.

 

[Sign_Boy]

I'd word it:

Save Money
On Your
Insurance
Come Inside
To Find Out How

Drop the $$$$

JMHO

 

[Jackpine]

Drop the shadows. They add nothing but it could be the color and placement.

I'd word it:

Save Money
On Your
Insurance
Come Inside
To Find Out How

Drop the $$$$

JMHO

 

[CES020]

They add nothing but it could be the color and placement.

The shadows are in opposite places, which I don't think looks right either. Delete them or make them them in the same place.

Just my opinion.

 

[OldPaint]

LOOSE THE SHADOWS......SAVE MONEY ON YOUR INSURANCE.........AND AN ARROW...less is more!!!!!

 

[Farmboy]

LOOSE THE SHADOWS......SAVE MONEY ON YOUR INSURANCE.........AND AN ARROW...less is more!!!!!

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

Sure does...lol

I get what you are trying to do but it just does not do it. excuse

SAVE MONEY is the most important phrase here,... then on insurance ...come on in will automatically be readable on top

As it reads save money is last thing to read.

PLEASE read Mike Stevens Mastering Layout this will explain how to arrange copy and many other guide lines to advertising.