Stumped. Livestock Transport Logo

[Wrangler]

Im working on this logo for myself and I like where it is at now. I just need to add "Schleswig, IA" under the rest but i dont know what style of font i should add it in. What do you all suggest? Would also like comments and critiques.

Eric

 

[GRAFIKWORX]

1. Fonts are hard to read.
2. Needs better spacing.
3. Doesn't look like a logo.

with livestock in your name, you would expect to see some kind of artwork,? some simple Animal, that will draw more attention then just two words with crappy kerning.



my opinion..

 

[GRAFIKWORX]

come to think about it, are you even in the sign business ?...

 

[Wrangler]

No im not. Im just doing designs for myself.

 

[HulkSmash]

Welcome from denver. That's not a logo, that's 2 fonts.

 

[WildWestDesigns]

That doesn't show anything about you being a livestock transport. I would figure you for a cow/calf operation with what you have there, not transport.

 

[OldPaint]

Yippy ki aye........mofo))))))))))

 

[wedosigns]

:ROFLMAO:

 

[Bobby H]

Not meaning to pile on the criticism, but even in terms of just picking two typefaces to make a quick design that one is a pretty odd combination.

Hand brushed style lettering like Sarah Script doesn't really go with squared off technical looking typefaces. And Sarah Script sure doesn't work as a small sub-head typeface. Small sub-head type is typically best set in a legible typeface, often san serif.

Something involving cattle doesn't really need to have old west looking wood type font treatment. Lots of different neutral looking typefaces, either serif or sans serif, can work. I just don't see techno looking type applying to anything involving cattle. It just doesn't feel right.

 

[ProWraps]

for $1995 ill sell you the rights.

just holla at a brotha.

 

[Wiggum PI]

:ROFLMAO: thats gold.

 

[qmr55]

C'mon, you gotta be a little more creative then that....

 

[slipperyfrog]

No im not. Im just doing designs for myself.

So you purchased Sara Script from LHF to "play around"? Just saying...

 

[HulkSmash]

for $1995 ill sell you the rights.

Just holla at a brotha.

lol

 

[Pat Whatley]

for $1995 ill sell you the rights.

just holla at a brotha.

For $2195 I'll sell you the complete version.

 

[ProWraps]

ok im going to call the copyright police on this one. I STOLE my stuff fare and square from images.google.com.

alls you did is add a ladder to my design. this is no pun intended, or is it, bullSH*T!!! oh man im angry.

 

[Pat Whatley]

There. I changed it more than 10% and put an infinite trademark on it. Plus my cow is a gay, asian-american, Buddhist cow. If you try anything I'll have you arrested for trying to use copyright law as a hate crime. That's a felony in 32 states, I'm pretty dang sure California is one of them.

 

[GAC05]

I don't think either of those will fly, they are too close to this to be qualified as derivatives.

wayne k
guam usa

 

[JoshLoring]

I'm just stumped

 

[BobM]

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