What am I supposed to do with this...the follow up.

[Pat Whatley]

Here's what he had and here's where we are at this point. Honest opinions welcome...so are smart assed comments, criticism, and appraisals. I'm a big boy, I can take it.

 

[CanuckSigns]

have you presented this to your customer? I'll be curious to know how he takes it. It is a vast improvement over the original, both in legibility and overall look.

 

[jfiscus]

the perspective on the light on the roof looks odd to me, otherwise great

 

[signage]

loose tail/wire and smoke under front tire

 

[Pat Whatley]

have you presented this to your customer?

I finally sold him on the idea of changing the picture but he's still insisting on a "cartoony icon", which is fine, I just thought it needed to be a more positive image.

 

[Jillbeans]

I like the tail but it doesn't need the smoke.
It's cute and fun and definitely a major improvement.
I do not like the roller on the mouse it reminds me of a clitorus.
So that might need some fidding with
(don't they all)
I would change the line above the name to an extended oval shadow, blue in color.
But all in all Pat I really like it.
Love....Jill

 

[d fleming]

Gotta love a woman who's spunky this early!

 

[jiarby]

I like the smoke AND the tail! I'd try to give the mouse some stylized line weight so it is not so uniform... looks like clipart with the thin outline

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

Outstanding, keep the tail, movement, smoke, but agrees with Jill fiddle with the roller ball on top define it better , just like saying fiddle maybe.
Anyway great before and after identity logo design knew ya could do it right.

 

[ddarlak]

the rims are not cartoony enough, looks like they were swiped from a cheesy early 90's corel clipart catalog....

 

[SignManiac]

Any other color you could use for the mouse besides 80's computer beige?

 

[ddarlak]

got to be a 70's reference somewhere...

 

[SignManiac]

I'm starting to visualize the roller wheel in pink?

 

[Billct2]

I like it and I like it when someone does a follow up so we can see where it went, thanks

 

[PressPrintGraphics]

I think it looks great, seems like it would fit the style he's looking for overall and still sell the product he's promoting. As with any customer, i'm sure he'll have a few tweaks here or there, but it can't be much - looks great to me.

Should be an easy sell.

 

[Mainframe]

Looks great to me run with it & get the money!

 

[Gino]

Just a few tweaks.

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Either way, its a great improvement. It's nice to see some people are open to suggestions without their pocketbook or ego getting in the way..... I'm talking about your customer.

 

[signcrafters london]

Looks great, Pat. The tail definitely needs to be there.

@Jill, what's wrong with the mouse button looking like that other button? Not enough of those in signs advertising, IMO.

 

[Marlene]

I like the tail as it makes it look like a mouse (the rodent) I said it in the part 2 thread and will again, it is a postive image. his is something sick and near death. yours shows action and that there's help on the way. as far as a logo goes, that is the better image to put out there. nice re-do! let us know what the customer thinks. I

 

[SignManiac]

I couldn't resist using my mouse Wanted to see how it would look less cartoony