What am I supposed to do with this...the follow up.

[Gino]

AH-h-h-h-h-h...........................

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[SignManiac]

Nice touch Gino I knew it was missing something....

Here with old school flame job!

 

[HulkSmash]

Shading it really helped.

 

[Deaton Design]

What if you added a doctor or emt type person driving the mouse?

 

[JR's]

Hi Pat,
here comes the complement sandwich.

It looks good and the graphic is 100% better than the old graphic.
But what I would change would be the slant in computer commuter, it seems to be fighting with the slant in the graphic.
lower commuter just a tad so you don't have compulsive graphic relativity.
Mobile computer repair might look good in a block reverse cut, and a little bit smaller.
But it does look good the way it is. The logo will also lend itself well to T-shirts and other promotional advertisements.

Well I am going to play with the button on my mouse now.

JR

 

[JR's]

Pretty cool John, I like the scrub cap.

 

[mark in tx]

Maybe add in some diamond plate swirls, man, it would look like a vehicle wrap!

Just kidding, your version is so much better.

 

[Craig Sjoquist]

The realistic mouse just don't get it sorry cartoon is the way to go for sure, even the doc in the mouse just does not look right...Pat nailed right from the get go and it looks great.

 

[dj_elite]

Tail looks good, its just the wire on a mouse comes out of the front. So yours looks like the wire is coming out of the rear. Maybe just leave it and change the light, the light does look weird

 

[Malkin]

Jill reminded me of one of my favorite comics.

 

[mikey-Oh]

does a mouse need a tail? we're wireless at teh shop.

also, dig mr. deaton's idea of a doc/tech in the drivers seat

 

[Colin]

In the image in the O/P, at a glance it reads as "COMPUTER COMPUTER".

Maybe try a different color for each word.

 

[chris.aceofsigns]

Isnt the "tail" coming out of the wrong end?

 

[Marlene]

how did this turn out? did you save the customer from that horrid sickly lawn mower mess? did he like what you did?