What'cha think of this design?

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This is for a gal who does ultrasounds for new moms to be. Strictly non-medical entertainment purposes. She wants something fun. The rectangular with the round corners will be a dimensional sign for the lobby.

I thought Jillbeans was the perfect font for this. I bet I get some comments on the other font I used.

I see this is my 3000th post.

 

[JR's]

I like the choice of font. The layout is good. And it looks like the logo will work in all kinds of venues.
On my screen the colors look washed out, maybe add a light navy blue outline.

Congratulations on your 3000 post.

J.R.

 

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Thanks JR. The colours are pastel but it does look a little off what I want on my screen too. The yellow in particular. I can't get a good pastel yellow for some reason.....looks a bit greyish on my machine. I know I can get the colours I want in paint and cut vinyl. It will need to go online so I will have to figure it out. I like it in black the best.

 

[B Snyder]

I would be recommending full color cards with a 3D ultrasound image on it. Seeing a 3D ultrasound image is what sells the service.

 

[Jillbeans]

I'm flattered you like the font, and you know me, I just love babies.
I like the "oo" making the face in Peekaboo.
I don't mind the bottom font. haha
But I do not like the green. Can't see any yellow!
I think I'd make that a black (or navy) blue panel with white lettering.
(kinda like an Xray or sono has a lighter image on a darker background)
(if memory serves)
If using navy, make the bottom copy navy too.
Love....Jill

 

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3d ultrasound looked like poopy browns to me. Here it is with your suggestions Jill. Thanks for looking.

 

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I think it's better without the inline.

 

[DOGraphics]

I like it.

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I like it.

FWIW
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Which one?

 

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I'm liking this teal/mint green.

 

[Circleville Signs]

I think the mint green looks better than the earlier versions.

It feels like there should be a way to make the 3D Baby Ultrasound and surrounding shape actually LOOK like an ultrasound image...Maybe with some photoshop work? I dunno - just an idea.


Gary

 

[abadsvt]

I like that last one with the teal and mint! It has some personality but not too much. I think it will appeal to everyone. Good job!

Josh

 

[SignManiac]

The design is starting to come together. My only suggestion would be to shorten up "we believe in love at first sight" to simply, "Love at first sight". It just seems to sum it all up as simply as possible.

 

[Shovelhead]

I think it should look more like a medical industry business and not a day-care....but
that's purely an aesthetic opinion.

 

[Tiki]

Increase the size of PeekABoo Baby Try a light grey outline around the mint green
Maybe put the tag line on top

 

[signmeup]

The design is starting to come together. My only suggestion would be to shorten up "we believe in love at first sight" to simply, "Love at first sight". It just seems to sum it all up as simply as possible.

I'll run that by them. Thanks.

 

[signmeup]

I think it should look more like a medical industry business and not a day-care....but
that's purely an aesthetic opinion.

I approched that very subject with the customer but she said it was exactly the opposite feel they were after. They aren't allowed to use the machine in any medical capacity. She said they don't even wear lab coats. They want it to feel like you're with your family at home... ( the grandparents, kids, friends and Mom and Pop attend this .) so it cuts out any medical imagery I could have used.

 

[signmeup]

Increase the size of PeekABoo Baby Try a light grey outline around the mint green
Maybe put the tag line on top

Thanks....I'll give it a try.

 

[Jillbeans]

I think I would like it better if the part in the panel was all-caps.

 

[Tiki]