please comment or redo that just kind of rubs me the wrong direction...not trying to be a richard head but normally you post up your ideaS and we help you improve.
one of my own personal pet peeves is when people post up work for improvement and design help when it is obvious they have invested very little into it themselves.
if you are not a seasoned professional designer (and there is nothing wrong with that at all) there are many very talented artists available for hire.
suggestions on the current project...design101 design in black and white first. all of the color, effects, etc will not save a poor design.
what are you trying to achieve? you have given us no information, no goals, nothing nada...all i can get from what has been supplied is the name of the restaurant.
what are we attempting to design? sign, logo, other?
is there an existing logo that needs to be incorporated?
what is the final use of the sign, or whatever we are designing?
what is the final size?
if you don't know the answers to these questions you should have or help your client fill out a design brief (you should always have the client fill out a design brief)
from my own perspective over the years i have noticed a couple things that i think are pretty common sense but here they are ... the more information you provide us the more we have to work with to help you create a design that you are happy with for YOUR clietn...and... the more effort you put into creating a great design for YOUR client the more positive input, direction, suggestion and effort the person asking for help tends to receive from the community...i mean seriously why should we invest our time and effort into YOUR project when you have not.