Who is the master sign maker.. Them or you? All you did was turn yourself into a nephew doing nephew art.
From a non expert sign maker who cannot draw a straight line with a ruler,,
Those smudges will look like smudges from 40 ft.
That frog with the hat will be invisible,
That script font will be unreadable and will not show any power.
It looks like genitalia between the words dance studio.
The phone number is useless and redundant.
So is the web address.
You make the text stronger,,,
Lose the web address and phone number,, it is misplaced on the lay out,,
that info goes on the door anyway..
They will criticize you when someone makes a comment about it. And someone will for sure. A sign is supposed to show strength, permanence and stability. That panel will not show that..