This is gonna sound dumb, but personally, I don't like it because of the combination of letters in his name. His name just doesn't look good like that. No flow. It appears mumbly-jumbly to me. too many curves and up-sweeps messing with the overall appearance.
I think it needs to be more solid and substantial looking to do him/his business any justice.
That being said, now look at this awful piece we're doing later today. The guy came in and told me what he wanted. I typed it in and started checking out type styles and he said I want something really crazy, so I put this up for chits and giggles and he said... go no further, that's it. I said c'mon, you're kiddin' me, right. He gave me $600 in advance on Wednesday and we're doing it today. I knew there was no changing his mind and it wasn't worth it, since he gave me the $600, so in my opinion, the guy has no class so why fiddle around with his kinda mentality ??
Sometimes............. you just know when to quit.