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The Shop Truck

Discussion in 'Portfolio Board' started by tonywhittier, Feb 28, 2013.

  1. tonywhittier

    tonywhittier Member

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    After many debates about the logo and the design...here is the finished product.
     

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  2. HDvinyl

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    Besides not being able to read your website, looks nice.

    Logo would've looked nice white(not blue) on the side.
     
  3. Mosh

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    I gonna pops some tags...I only got $20 in my pocket.
     
  4. xxaxx

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    Looks nice, except you cant read the website very well.
     
  5. HulkSmash

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    Great job! That'll turn some heads.
     
  6. Marlene

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    wow, that sure is something.
     
  7. fmg

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    Really nice.Well done.Even the paisley curtain design looks good.
     
  8. Pat Whatley

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    I actually like it. Sure, the logo could have used a little tweaking and the back is a little busy but all in all I like it....and I hate almost every wrap I see.

    The only thing that jumps out at me is the "stand out in a crowd" tagline. SignsNow uses "Stand out in a crowded world". You're a little close in my opinion but nobody outside the industry would notice that.
     
  9. xxaxx

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    Jealous much? hehe jkjk
     
  10. HulkSmash

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    Here's one of ours.

    Matte Black with Like a Gloss Metallic Blue overlay print on top of the matte.
    A Real head turner, and trust me it is getting a ton of attention.

    It's all about what's going to bring the business in. I see people taking pictures of the wrap as they're driving by daily.
     

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  11. Craig Sjoquist

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    ...I like to say something positive that ya put much effort in.

    I like the side graphic looks edgy & same with the Sharpy design look of the back.

    Also KNOW you can do alot better..... Also expect to see it within 6 months.

    PLEASE read ...Mike Stevens Mastering Layout 1st
     
  12. Craig Sjoquist

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    Colorado....Very nice can see why they take pictures & gets you responses.

    Note your eye goes to the main message...Note light color area on black then copy is light enough to be readable on color.

    Only thing I see odd is that panel over back wheel ya lost the flow, if panel was mirrored front ya have better flow.

    You sure have improved alot.
     
  13. Marlene

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    ya, jealous, that's it. no, I was blessed with the gift of sight
     
  14. HulkSmash

    HulkSmash Major Contributor

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    ^ huh?
     
  15. tonywhittier

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    I'm gla you like it..that's what I was hoping for.........................................
     
  16. Marlene

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    it was an answer to a crack at me. in the orginal thread, the design for this was posted and many suggestions were made as there are a ton of issues with the design, none were taken by the OP who went ahead and put this on his truck and still, has no clue as to what is wrong with it. he is happy and that is that, not much to do past that now. I posted "wow, that sure is something" as I rally thought that when I saw the finished wrap it would have the issues corrected and it would look nice, that didn't happen. it was my way of trying to be kind and not tell the OP that it is hidious, poorly composed, hard to read with black outlines on dark blue letters and messy looking. some like it so be it, jealous? not a chance
     
  17. GAC05

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    The picture taking guys - was it this guy?.....

    wayne k
    guam usa
     

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  18. tonywhittier

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    I took what people said into consideration and majority of if was about the logo which I said I wasn't changing...I'm sorry YOU don't like it and really could care less if MARLENE from signs101 likes it. Majority of the people like it minus some small stuff which can be fixed...I believe it's bed time in the nursing home so see ya :)
     
  19. HulkSmash

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    LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

    ok i'm done.
     
  20. Flame

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    If you never take criticism, you will never improve. You have a half a** layout, I'm sorry. What you DO have, is a good flow, good colors, and it does pop pretty good! But you're only halfway there, because your logo BUTCHERS the text very horribly. That style is cool and catchy, it just needs better execution.

    Same goes for the back website. Making it blue, thumbs up. Making it THAT dark of a blue, thumbs down.

    Overall bro, I think you need to take some criticism, and if you do, you could be cranking out some very sick stuff. Take your style and flair, work on the technicality of it, and I'd say you're golden.

    That's my $0.02, and not given to you to make myself look good, but to hopefully help a bro out. Best of luck man.
     
  21. xxaxx

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    Haha thats the right attitude ... Just wait til the phone calls start rolling in and see who was right.
     
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