Thoughts, questions, concerns?

[ucmj22]

any sore thumbs here?

 

[J Hill Designs]

like!

 

[njsigns]

I really like it a lot... except the phone number - I don't know why but it seems out of place/disconnected from an otherwise fantastic design.

just my .02
Gene

 

[HulkSmash]

Really nice design. The installer is going to shoot you in the face when he sees that pinstripe'd layout.

 

[ucmj22]

Really nice design. The installer is going to shoot you in the face when he sees that pinstripe'd layout.

LOL I am the installer! and that has already been noted. I thought maybe the frequency of the lines would help.

 

[Rick]

GARAVALIA copy looks too tight, i would loosen up the tracking a little bit...

I agree with Gene, the phone number looks disconnected...

overall nice layout.

 

[wildside]

great design, i would agree about the phone though, have you tried it tucked under the logo, smaller?

i also would try the pinstripes going vertical, but maybe not

great job!

 

[Gino]

Yes, Garavalia is definitely too tight and the phone number looks a little whacky that size and where it is.

Maybe it's the presentation, but it certainly oozes Dan A's kinda work.

 

[Ponto]

great design, i would agree about the phone though, have you tried it tucked under the logo, smaller?

i also would try the pinstripes going vertical, but maybe not

great job!

...also agree,...ph # misplaced and good luck with the pinstriping.... but if you're up for a challenge.............enjoy.........

JP

 

[slipperyfrog]

Agree with others on the phone number.

Any reason for the pin stripes are absolutely needed. I think it would still look fabulous without them and still be retro.

 

[john1]

I thought Dan designed it when i opened this thread, Looking good

 

[Sticky Signs]

Hmmm, look familiar

 

[ucmj22]

Yes, Garavalia is definitely too tight and the phone number looks a little whacky that size and where it is.

Maybe it's the presentation, but it certainly oozes Dan A's kinda work.

Thats probably the best compliment I've ever received

here is a tweaked layout addressing concerns

 

[ucmj22]

Hmmm, look familiar

Dang you sticky signs! why does everything have to have been done before!

 

[sar bossier]

Other than the font and location of the text, I think it's great!

 

[strypguy]

Lmao!!

 

[sar bossier]

Thats probably the best compliment I've ever received

here is a tweaked layout addressing concerns

Well, damn - I posted my opinion apparently at the same time you posted this ... LOVE THIS ONE!!

 

[SignProPlus-Chip]

Hope you don't mind...just a quick and dirty mock up....I'd probably approach it like this.

 

[ucmj22]

Hmmm, look familiar

I felt obliged to reverse the color, and Actually I think it stands out more..

 

[GAC05]

Good progress so far.
I think the 24hr text is a little isolated now.
Maybe move it up higher and more centered on the door.\
The other issue is that it looks like the area code will shift the phone number partially off the door on the other side.

wayne k
guam usa

 

[ucmj22]

Good progress so far.
I think the 24hr text is a little isolated now.
Maybe move it up higher and more centered on the door.\
The other issue is that it looks like the area code will shift the phone number partially off the door on the other side.

wayne k
guam usa

Good point, I hadn't thought about the other side yet. I'll have to find a fix for that.