Flower Shop Logo feedback

[firstclassvinyls]

added some flowers and sewed it on this morning....

Really like the font !!

 

[firstclassvinyls]

Thanks everyone for your opinions. I visualized it a different way and put a few of your ideas combined within the design. Let me know which one works the best thank you all!!

 

[Signmaker1234]

Nice work!

Both are nice, I think I like them both, but I think the top one!

 

[Pixels Are Bad Mmmkay?]

Your copy is all over the place. Almost reads "Country & Floral Gifts".

 

[player]

Your copy is all over the place. Almost reads "Country & Floral Gifts".

I agree. There is something amiss here.

 

[Jillbeans]

Too much emphasis on the ampersand.
Not much of an improvement.

 

[Signmaker1234]

Play around with the "& Gifts" part, the placement?

 

[Marlene]

the font you switched to has less going on with the letters in country then it does with the word floral. since the word floral has a lot of movement and country is so static, I'd go back to making the "C" into a flower with leaves like your first attempt and leave the word floral as is. also put it on the same baseline as country as it looks odd.

 

[Signmaker1234]

I agree

the font you switched to has less going on with the letters in country then it does with the word floral. since the word floral has a lot of movement and country is so static, I'd go back to making the "C" into a flower with leaves like your first attempt and leave the word floral as is. also put it on the same baseline as country as it looks odd.

I thought about that too, moving the flower back to the "c", I think it would balance it out?

 

[copythat]

: )

Perhaps something like Style Casual and Sylfaen fit the bill.

This version looks classy






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[firstclassvinyls]

Thanks everyone for the replies. I think everyone has different opinions and it will be that ways regardless of what we come up with. I do respect everyone opinions as well and we are just going to go with what fits the bill. I am very happy with the inputs and the direction it took from the first one presented. Thank you all and until the next one!!!

 

[John Butto]

differentopions

lastone

 

[Marlene]

I thought about that too, moving the flower back to the "c", I think it would balance it out?

give it a try to see if it works. I'd like to see you or it to get it looking right then to just copy some of the ideas posted as that won't do you much good in learning to fix and balance out a design. the ideas posted have been good but only if they help you see what works and why. keep trying

 

[Jillbeans]

This is a visual of what I suggested the other day.
It may be a bit heavy on the Country but at least it looks concise and upbeat.

 

[SuncitySigns]

Pay Jill and job done buddy!

 

[Signmaker1234]

Awesome

This is a visual of what I suggested the other day.
It may be a bit heavy on the Country but at least it looks concise and upbeat.

That looks great!

 

[John Butto]

Nice work JillBeans

Put a little twist to it

 

[Jillbeans]

That is a fun twist. I like that idea.
But do you see what I mean about putting the floral & gift on one line?
I think it just reads better.