New logo

[stoneandtle]

I'm working on my logo and wanted to get some opinions on design and layout.

My first one was just something thrown together...this one has more thought in it.

This is my first pass, so go easy on me LOL

 

[J Hill Designs]

<shudder>

 

[stoneandtle]

<shudder>

Looks that bad?

 

[Jet Fast Printing]

I don't mean to sound rude AT ALL (my logo ain't the best either)

Start over.

 

[stoneandtle]

I don't mean to sound rude AT ALL (my logo ain't the best either)

Start over.

What parts of it don't you like? Is it the colors? The layout? Or just everything in general?

 

[Locals Find!]

I can barely see the car and the blue is too light. Just my two cents.

 

[Flame]

I'm kind of dumbfounded....how did you get into wraps? Wraps is not entry level work, that logo looks worse than most high school art I see.

I'm just...dumbfounded bro.

 

[formanek]

I'm kind of dumbfounded....how did you get into wraps? Wraps is not entry level work, that logo looks worse than most high school art I see.

I'm just...dumbfounded bro.

 

[WildWestDesigns]

I would also say bring out the car as well.

 

[SignManiac]

I think you would do better to hire a professional than try to glintch your own together. Just because you can wrap, does not mean you can design a logo that would serve you better.

 

[John Butto]

get some attention

ouch...

 

[Gino]

I get the idea of the fades and maybe even the color combinations, but they don’t work with all of your ideas scrunched into one design. You have too many things going on. Effects, bad colors, wrong contrast for lettering to color background, wrong elements emphasized, poor choice of fonts and doesn’t pass the squint test for any part. Take it into grey scale and you’ll get an idea of color usage. As far as shape combinations… you’ll have to experiment some more.

 

[Jet Fast Printing]

What parts of it don't you like? Is it the colors? The layout? Or just everything in general?

The colors seem 1990's to me. Diamond plate is way overused, and the car gets lost.

again, I am NO master designer, just my thoughts.

 

[ForgeInc]

Don't take it the wrong way, there is just too much wrong here to even give constructive advice....do yourself a favor and hire someone, it will be money well spent. Trust us!!

 

[michsanford]

I think it is just too much...and not very fond of the colors.

 

[john1]

IMO start over and i would focus more on the Paint Protection Film wording. Make that your main copy and the business name your sub copy since it really doesn't mean anything of paint protection film to me anyway

 

[petesign]

I like the shield. Ditch the blue on top, and make thin skin armor take up the shield. Ditch the diamond plate, and make it metallic.

I see what you are trying to go for, but it's like you took two logo ideas and put them together into one. One thing I have learned on here is to keep it SIMPLE.

Just a quick simple thing.. not sure how you would incorporate wraps in it.. But it's cleaner if you want to go the shield route. I am by no means designing along the lines of the many great artists you see here, but maybe this could help steer you in another direction.

 

[AUTO-FX]

I like the sheild idea too. Here's something I threw together with similar colors, maybe this helps?

ok, yukky colors

 

[petesign]

Like him ^^^^

hahahahaha

 

[AUTO-FX]

ohhhh, all right then, sorry!


Hey Adholio, should I give up and hire a professional?